tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post2293703334669972394..comments2023-05-20T06:34:15.507-05:00Comments on Everything and Nothing At All: 3WWCrystal Phareshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14881609059618148820noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-63130636717643814022009-02-10T12:54:00.000-06:002009-02-10T12:54:00.000-06:00Bravo, Crystal! Well done with the pacing, and the...Bravo, Crystal! Well done with the pacing, and the story grabs and holds.Barbara Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-27629601331376596232009-02-06T11:40:00.000-06:002009-02-06T11:40:00.000-06:00well done for 3ww! Welcome!these three words worke...well done for 3ww! Welcome!<BR/>these three words worked for mirroring relationships and you captured one on it's last straw.Daily Panichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06179183072566661932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-29392959101126827642009-02-05T08:49:00.000-06:002009-02-05T08:49:00.000-06:00Well woven! Scary StoryWell woven! <BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://the-awm.blogspot.com/2009/02/scary-story.html" REL="nofollow">Scary Story</A>M as in Minthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02737629866326152834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-55180776475622643552009-02-05T08:29:00.000-06:002009-02-05T08:29:00.000-06:00It flowed very well...you had my attention! Great ...It flowed very well...you had my attention! Great read.Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-59272526838596312492009-02-05T05:45:00.000-06:002009-02-05T05:45:00.000-06:00Very tight. Wonderful short fiction..dancing verse...Very tight. Wonderful short fiction..<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/02/dancing-verses.html" REL="nofollow">dancing verses</A>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-25716421809501410402009-02-04T19:33:00.000-06:002009-02-04T19:33:00.000-06:00Ah, the wronged husband! And wow, the TV Mom cert...Ah, the wronged husband! And wow, the TV Mom certainly knew her theatrics, crumpling to the floor across the room from her accuser! Well done :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-87034903065165322262009-02-04T19:20:00.000-06:002009-02-04T19:20:00.000-06:00A plausible build, great dialogue, strong ending. ...A plausible build, great dialogue, strong ending. A wonderful first-time effort for 3WW. I hope it will not be your last. I appreciate your style.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-40737038912796083052009-02-04T17:37:00.000-06:002009-02-04T17:37:00.000-06:00very nice! i can see this as a play..very nice! i can see this as a play..floretahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-17058837403185272522009-02-04T17:28:00.000-06:002009-02-04T17:28:00.000-06:00A seeable scene! Nice work...A seeable scene! Nice work...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-82983799655771664232009-02-04T16:27:00.000-06:002009-02-04T16:27:00.000-06:00Nicely written and paced. Excellent for a first ou...Nicely written and paced. Excellent for a first outing here.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6315194362154699082.post-9898892825786321922009-02-04T14:25:00.000-06:002009-02-04T14:25:00.000-06:00Tense and familiar. Good job trying your hand at s...Tense and familiar. Good job trying your hand at short fiction.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.com